What if I told you that my book has gotten even better?

What if I told you I've got a surprise for you?

And what if... you click the post already? (¬_¬) Seriously, the suspense is killing me!

Flynne decides to pop by the Larkspurs’ house on her way back from Moonflower Valley, and the siblings interact with her and each other in hilarious conversation.

I’ve been a busy little author this week. I’ve plotted out chapters and scenes, fleshed out characters and my world, and pondered how to make my characters suffer, develop, shine, and dazzle readers and myself when they perform on the page.

After telling her sister about her trip into the Black Forest, Clementine tries to subtly bring up the Foxes to her dad over dinner— and immediately wishes she hadn’t. The mention of the riffraff that lived in the forest surrounding her kingdom brings up awful, awful memories, of the death of the late king of Moonflower Valley.

After meeting Clementine, Flynne races through the forest to tell her best friends. As she nears their home, though, she stops to reminisce about how she met them. She’d never forget that day…

Nobody thinks a single action has the power to completely alter the course of their lives. Clementine certainly didn’t. But one day after school, she pops into the forest on her way home- and meets someone that will change her life forever.

I’ve talked a lot about just writing in general, but my Work In Progress is still very much a mystery. So let’s uncover The Secret of Moonflower Valley…